crash cart - ghazal
Relax and slow down, darlin, breathe for meThe sands of time fall fast for you and meSirens scream and wail yet can you still hearThe echo in your heart resounds of meI pull the 02 mask off to be...
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Very dramatic Mike. Excellent choice of a form that lends itself so well to this mood.
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Cheers mate. The ghazal is a funky lil style when you have the right clothes on it..
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A picture slide in my head! accident, ER, angels of Death....etc etc! enjoyed the read, nevertheless... Leny
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Excellent Ghazal, Mike!! In fact, I had to look twice to confirm it was indeed a Ghazal - you successfully avoided that "enough already" repetition we see so often in Ghazals (mine included!!)As for...
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Shhh dont tell anyone but it wasnt always going to be like this in the poem..*hehe*.. It cames as it were when I was 3 quarters through it..*S*..
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Indeedly doodley it is!..*lol*..Yeah its hard to avoid the repetition and I think I made it a bit harder for myself by using the word me as the repeat.. Happy with the way it turned out though..*S*..
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